Really, I know, I should have someone check on my English (it's not my native language). The problem is "who", since I have no English/American friends and all the attemps I made in finding editors here on LIT were wasted time (seems no one is able to keep his word, these days).
I'm usually a stickler for grammar, but I wasn't bothered at all by the grammar in this story. You pulled me into the action from the beginning, and held my attention throughout. Thank you for writing it. If the ratings system worked, I would have given it five stars.
English
Nice story. Bad grammar
Have somebody proof before you post. Good story. Good content. Poor grammar. A lot of errors.
Thank you
Really, I know, I should have someone check on my English (it's not my native language). The problem is "who", since I have no English/American friends and all the attemps I made in finding editors here on LIT were wasted time (seems no one is able to keep his word, these days).
Ignore the rude comment
I'm usually a stickler for grammar, but I wasn't bothered at all by the grammar in this story. You pulled me into the action from the beginning, and held my attention throughout. Thank you for writing it. If the ratings system worked, I would have given it five stars.
yum
Dont worry about the grammer. This was yummy.
Great work!
You've got to continue... I love your stories...
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