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by Amyfriend01/04/07

Excellent, very well written.

I somply loved the 'spontainiousness' (new word I think) of the act.
Sexy and so cool.

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by Anonymous07/26/07

well written... butt...

I enjoyed the premise and the build up, however, it was a bit tough to follow the imagery and lets be real, a 23 year have un expected sex with his hot older boss and he last 13 minutes? which also doesn't flow with the fast recovery theme. Keep writing and i will keep reading

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by Harper208/26/08

warm stormy night

"Thirteen minutes' was a bit clinical and made it sound as if someone was using a stopwatch. But it was more than made up for by "Launching into the warm stormy night of her body"
We writers always put a little of ourselve into our work, this comment reveals you as a very sensual person.

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