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Bloody Mary

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/21/14

bang

the first line intrigues, the second captures, toward the end, it becomes expected still not the ordinary
5ed

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by Trixareforkids05/24/14

Harsh

Real, not as raw as I'd expected from the first few lines. 5d
Reminds me of Woman Go by Joe Purdy. Fucking love that song. Don't LOVE this, but it does draw you in and keep you there.

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