drag his ass out in the front yard and stomp him into the ground in front of both set of parents and let them know why.then beat his ass everyday for a week.
Good story. Maybe the brother, sister and the mom could talk about what happend. And they tell their Mom that Ross tricked them into doing it.
Since they have already started it then they can just be comfortable doing it again in the open.
I thought about doing more, or making it about four chapters, but I like where it ended, an author should know when to end a story, second guessing is a double edged sword.
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drag his ass out in the front yard and stomp him into the ground in front of both set of parents and let them know why.then beat his ass everyday for a week.
Good story
Good story. Maybe the brother, sister and the mom could talk about what happend. And they tell their Mom that Ross tricked them into doing it.
Since they have already started it then they can just be comfortable doing it again in the open.
I thought about doing more, or making it about four chapters, but I like where it ended, an author should know when to end a story, second guessing is a double edged sword.
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