Kimberly's Sin Ch. 02

very good

I can't wait for more.

Me too!

Look forward to Mom opening up and pursuing her son's cock!

To short

This is a good story but chapters are to short . Should have added some more to this one . Keep going you have talent .

Loved it!

Eagerly awaiting your next bit long or short, it's all wonderful.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

****

I smile reading her struggles with her desire. I really hope carnality wins. She is sobbing so much of the time. After all, sex is sinful, her desire is sinful, and with her son? My god, the big guy must be preparing a special place in hell for her. On the other hand she walks around in a t-shirt and panties. No bra I presume. And where did she pick up terms like "load?" And she says she never used to swallow when you would think she would be horrified at the very thought of putting a man's erect penis in her mouth (in my mouth? you must be kidding!) and sucking(!) on it! Ah Kimberly, your resistance, to the extent any of it is real, is eroding fast under the gentle wash of your son's semen. Let's hope she gets a really great fuck and joins the rest of us sinners in the pleasures of the here and now.

SO good

Well written and erotic; sensual and thoughtful. Ed

Seriously?

You decided to retell the first chapter to fill almost half of the second? This woman's emotional state is not the least bit conducive to a romantic, erotic incest story. I've lost count of how many times the mom whined, "I can't do this, this is wrong". It has virtually no meaning after the first time In chapter 1, it was a bit annoying. Now it's just ridiculous.. I was wondering how one stops crying hysterically"slightly"? I think that there is a good reason that Lit didn't rate this chapter as hot.

really?

This is how the first chapter should have ended, what a waste of time for a second edition ...

loved it

waiting for the next part this short episodes increase the excitement

Hoping for part 3!

Ignore the negative comments

You are going a great job and pacing the story brilliantly. I look forward to Part 3.

More, more, and then more! can't get enough of this!

You have your detractors.......

Hi ! But they are in the minority. It is easier , in my opinion, to critcsize, than to compliment.

You have a good story going, keep your two characters learning each other , and then perhaps for flavor add another male and female.

Thanks

Terrific!

This is a GREAT series! Please keep writing, you have a talent for it. Your story and the personalities, the mental conflicts, are very real.

Great Story!! Looking forward to many more chapters!

Good story line

The storyline is good, but the way you are presenting it is nearly in an unfeeling manner. She is placing herself above all the consequences of her actions, so far, and blaming everything on her divorce 4 1/2 years ago. You have her talking as if she has PTSD, even as she strokes her sons 'Enormous Penis,' in a daze. You can't have it both ways.

Good story

I have this image in my mind from your story that is intoxicating...

THE BIG WTF

IN THIS STORY IS THAT THE COLLEGE GRAD IS GOING TO WORK ON AN OFFSHORE RIG.

Loved the blowjob but the chapter W's really really short. Hope chapter 3 is longer.