Musical Roots or Curl Up and Dye

so many of your pieces leave me struggling and confused

But this I discern a sense of reason out of, your first sentence is some Damn powerful writing. Enjoyed this piece.

Thanks!

I'm glad that the work prompted a response!

What an odd and oddly lovely ramble.

I especially loved the line "I take pills to sustain sane." That'll go in my book of great lines.

TAFK (great name)

thank you for your comments.I look forward to reading your work. I vote but rarely comment as often I cannot explain why I rate as such. I'll try harder.

This makes me think of that poem you submitted a few weeks ago, "I love you". At least, I think that was you. There is a lot going on beneath the words here, some strange metaphors. This is very open ended, and will confuse most readers, but you do have a frame in place. Some people will see it, I think. I'm not even sure I see it, though. Interesting and some really good lines in there. Thank you for the read.

Tsotha

'twas me. Folks hated that one. I don't blame 'em. Trite and silly.