Just another stupid story with him calling her "babygirl" and himself "daddy".
"Babygirl, do you know what would make Daddy very happy? "
"Do you like the way Daddy's treat tastes?"
Total and utter shite.
Almost perfect except for the... Well the same thing is beaing said so if u can get some variation in the words that would be spectacular
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Anonymous08/04/14
please can you write ch 04 quickly!
please can you write ch 04 quickly!
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Anonymous11/19/14
I give it a three
I thought this chapter was too short and repetitive.
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Anonymous01/27/15
Pretty short, and calling her a slut totally ruined it for me. Either shes his good little girl or his bad little girl. If he wants a slut he can start banging the girl next door that puts out for the football team before games, then he'll be getting what he's calling her.
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Good story, hope to see more soon!
review
Keep writing. This is a great series
More garbage!
Just another stupid story with him calling her "babygirl" and himself "daddy".
"Babygirl, do you know what would make Daddy very happy? "
"Do you like the way Daddy's treat tastes?"
Total and utter shite.
You have a wonderful erotic way of writing!
Wonderful! Keep up the good work!
love it!
hope to see more from you in this series
amazing...
Almost perfect except for the... Well the same thing is beaing said so if u can get some variation in the words that would be spectacular
please can you write ch 04 quickly!
please can you write ch 04 quickly!
I give it a three
I thought this chapter was too short and repetitive.
Pretty short, and calling her a slut totally ruined it for me. Either shes his good little girl or his bad little girl. If he wants a slut he can start banging the girl next door that puts out for the football team before games, then he'll be getting what he's calling her.
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