one of the best writers, glad to read you back :)
You obviously know little about true pain. Torturing another human being isn't sexy or erotic and certainly wouldn't lead to an orgasm on his part. And one good shot to her throat and she'd be all done. A truly horrible story.
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one of the best
one of the best writers, glad to read you back :)
Yeah because the pain would cause him to cum.
You obviously know little about true pain. Torturing another human being isn't sexy or erotic and certainly wouldn't lead to an orgasm on his part. And one good shot to her throat and she'd be all done. A truly horrible story.
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