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Kimberly's Sin Ch. 04

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by cookie40405/22/14

Tally HO !!!!

The race is on....I think mom becomes the wanton , and her son the puppet to meet her demands.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks

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by writerjab05/22/14

I like it!

Mom is coming around to enjoying being the object of her son's affection. Nice that she sucked his cock and enjoyed it!

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by dutch513nels05/22/14

To short

This one was to short. Needed another page .

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by cindyexposed05/22/14

next chapter will be intense

I realize chapters 2 & 4 were rather short; they were transitions to the next chapter. Chapter 5 (which is pending review), will be linger, more involved and intense. Thanks for all the positive comments on all the chapters. To those who criticize the work, I am sorry you do not like my writing; I realize my style of writing is not everyone's 'cup of tea'. But I am writing about genuine emotions on a complex subject.

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by rodav05/22/14

exciting

I love the way you write the story. Very well written . Very loving mother and son. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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by rodav05/22/14

Wish I could send you a private comments

Anyway. I would like to invite you to check the Bulletin board under Story Ideas. The subject is " Incest accidental penetration" I posted that few scenarious of a Mother and son or A brother and sister.
Most responses were telling me to write it mysef. But I am not and you are way way so good and I can say a brilliant writer. You can make it a very good story.

Please let us know.

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by Slolickr05/22/14

Talent will out

Anyone who doesn't feel a rush of excitement while reading your stories should check to see if they have a pulse. I like your style and look forward to the next chapters...

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by navelman05/23/14

amazing series

love this series. the sex is superb but more than that is the erotic dialogue. just love every bit of it. usually i do not read series especially when the episodes are being written. but this one i cant wait to get the next one. great work. rated 5

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by kennyboy8205/24/14

What a fantastic story this is! Not just your usual suck'n'fuck mom fucks son type story, it's far more complex than that. Well written, very hot sex scenes, and it could be a real life scenario! More, a lot more, please!

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by Sex4lf5708/16/14

Another short chapter but hot blowjob. Hard to get a good jerk off motion going before the chapter ended. Hopefully chapter 5 will be longer.

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by Dark_Storm12/08/14

Still more sexual education needed

Fucking "bareback" is sexual intercourse with an uncovered penis, hence the cock is bare or "bareback". It has nothing to do with whether the woman is on the pill or any other form of birth control. Unless the male's penis is wrapped in a condom, it's "bareback".

Even when the mother had her diaphragm in, they were still fucking bareback. Even if she goes on the pill, they will still be fucking bareback, unless the son is wearing a condom. Even if the woman is using birth control, ANY sex with a cock not covered in a condom is "bareback" and opens both partners to contracting/spreading STDs.

Please educate yourself before writing any more stories with sexual fallacies in them.

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