All Comments on 'Jinzōningen: Fuck Puppet'

I think that this is not going to end well for Ken....

You kept refering that it seamed like she showed emtion, but it was impossible because she was a machine. I could understand if this would lead to something being revealed later on, but you story ended short, thus it made most of your details unnecessary. This story was the equivalent of a quick bathroom jerk durring school hours, you really should have expanded it.

You set this up as an eager, hard working kid in the days of robots, and 'good for nothings, who wouldn't know a days work...' who has been eyeing an older sex robot. Then when he gets it, he turns into this asshole. Sorry, it doesn't work, you didn't invest the work needed in character development.

I guess you never mowed lawns as a kid, either.