All Comments on 'Jinzōningen: My First Jinzōningen'

this is an interesting series of short stories :-) ... and it follows through on some of the discussions that took part over the past few years on a couple of the "adult" doll sites ... about what could be done with the HRP-4C fembot if it was given to 4Woods or Orient for them to create a soft silicone skin for her instead of the hard shell body she has now ... give her conversational ability using one of the better chatbot/AI programs like UltraHal by Zabaware ... and a few other "improvements" using currently available products .................... it does make you wonder just how close we really are to the first generation of jinzoningen ... :-)

makes it a bit difficult to read when you have to stop and figure what SHOULD be there, im addition to what is.

Then, at the end, you set up the scenario where she's an exibitionist with her new owner, but the very last sentence is in the wrong tense, and out of sequence. It was jarring.

If you're going to write half page stories, they gotta be tight; the impact of errors overwhelms the story, otherwise.