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A Girl Like Victoria

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by brockl305/21/14

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Hope this continues...!

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by interpreter_x05/21/14

fantastically arousing

This story was a pleasure to read, the build up and sexual tension between the two characters led up to a well described and very erotic climax, I gave this story a four out of five and enjoyed it quite a bit.

The only thing which it lacked was more dialogue and character interaction, they're fast transition into sex seemed forced and a little TOO fast. I feel that more character interaction (before the sex) and exploration of their first encounter online would have built the sexual tension significantly and that the sex scene could have had more foreplay and been more drawn out.

I'd just like to say that all my criticism is meant to be constructive and that I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Thanks to the author for all your hard work.

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by 510mike05/25/14

Very Exciting!

Great story about my all-time favorite fantasy. So incredibly horny after reading it....thank you!

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by mstrhole05/27/14

Bravo!

Well told. Would love to have this experience myself. Thanks for sharing it here.

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by Lucky165006/24/14

That was very hot!!!

Loved that story very much gave it 5 stars would have giving moré if posible. My cock is so hard with pre-cum dripping from the tip of my cock. I a fantásy of been with a shemale but to this day it is still a fantásy. Hope that some day it become a reallity. I would love to have her cock deep in my ass but the diference would be that, I would want her to fuck my ass without a condom. I want to feel her cum deep in my bowels. I'm a married bi male that just a few years ago discovered that, I enjoyed having gay sex. So far, I've sucked cock and just a short while expereinced having anal sex. I've still haven't been able to have it cum in my mouth yet! or haven't done añal with out a condom but one day with the right person that William change. I'm a happily married person and love having sex with my wife but, I get this urges to have a cock between my líps and in my ass. My wife isn't aware of this and I know she would leave me if she was to find out but, I can't help it, I need a hard cock once in a while. Reading your story brought back some urges and a fantásy of been with a shemale. That would be the ultimate expereince for me,having the best of both worlds. Again Thanks for your story.

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