daddy gets caught with lily by wife and joins in and maybe the boys
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Anonymous05/23/14
this is a great story
Okay, so daddy's a little rough and forceful as he's busting his baby girl's cherry. But it had to happen sooner or later, and it might as well be dad who does it. At first Lil's in shock, but I bet that very soon she gets to appreciate how good her father's fat veiny daddy-dick feels up her sweet little slit. That opens the flood gates, and her big brothers will be the beneficiaries of their baby sister's new found lust. Getting her to suck them off was fine, but now her cute little cunt will be permanently open for business for all the big hard cocks of her family. Jason and Chris will be blowing their brotherly balls up between their kid sis's legs, just like dad'll be shooting his huge loads of sperm, part of the same sperm that made her, up his darling girl's tight little twat. Lil'll love having her twat clogged by family sperm from family balls, she'll be over the moon having big family cocks pumping away and fucking the living shit out of her. Her cunt'll be communal property for all three horny family males, and she'll have her cunt pounded and slammed by family cock whenever and wherever the boys get the slightest urge.
Drunken son of a bitch needs his balls cut off and the boys need a cock up their ass to see how it feels to be Raped!
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Anonymous05/24/14
Her slight lack of 'no' still makes it rape..
Yeah it reads like a rape fantasy.. Not the daddy/ daughter stuff usually on here and I'm glad this kind of story is in the minority. But it should be relabled as such.
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Anonymous05/24/14
Totally hot!
Well, I don't know about all them Grumpy Guses, but I liked it! Thank you.
I truly apologise for the offence my story has caused and have requested its removal from the site. Not sure how long this takes but it is in the process. Again, my sincerest apologies.
I love this story. So what if all you butthurt idiots get offended. Some people LIKE this stuff, force, aggression, dominance. It's a part of some people's nature. I you don't like it, don't read it. She's not condoning actual rape.
But I actually loved this story, it contained a lot of fantasies I enjoy and I really hope you don't take it down. Fuck what they say you can write what you want! They can't just go around boycotting every rape fantasy that people express in a SAFE way!
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Anonymous05/24/14
Don't let anyone shame you for your fantasies!
I think it just could stand to be recategorized as nonconsent. But, I think it's kind of tame compared to lots of those stories. It's all fantasy! Tons of these incest (also a crime, mind you, you who complain!) stories center on non-consent. I might re-categorize it simply because it never changes to a pleasurable experience. I've seen that handled well with a simple disclaimer previous to the story. It's fair warning and if they still get offended, well they chose to read past the disclaimer.
If you do not like a story, stop reading it. No one is forcing you to do anything. You can do that with a click of the mouse! And those Anonymous people that leave negative and hurtful comments, how "real" are you? I have read hundreds of stories that I don't like for one reason or another and never leave hurtful comments. Click away and move on. Little Girl, you are a great writer, don't let the foolishness of a few get you down.
If these anons don't like your story, it's just a click away for them to read something else. You wrote and posted this story in the honest belief you were writing something people will like, and the evidence is there; a lot of people do. OK, this type of story is not my thing, but I still think you have a right to post it as your honest work, and if some people don't like it, tough. Don't let yourself be bullied by a bunch of know-it-all dicks who've never had the gumption to actually create anything themselves, but are brave enough to attack you anonymously. Don't delete this story, enough people believe it has merit, listen to them as well.
You have a story that doesn't suit the taste of some people. (At least a couple signed their name to the compliant; that's more than the poison pen people usually do.) You like the story? You did the best you could? Don't pull it just because a few complained. Look at your score. Look at the comments; most are very favorable. Part of the problem with our country are those in the PC crowd who think all should comply with their wishes. NEWS FLASH! No one forced you to read it; you can either stop as soon as you see you don't like it or you can express your displeasure by voting low. You also have a right to comment, but don't you think the comment should be one that points out the problem? Yes, a few seemed to try and signed their name. Maybe you others should follow their lead.
LIL, STICK BY YOUR GUNS! DON'T PULL IT AND DO WRITE WHAT YOU LIKE.
I enjoyed this,,,it's incest mixed with non consent, but still good so stick to your guns and keep writing,,take note of the desenters but don't give in to them,,if they don't like it what the f*** are they doing on here in the first place.
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Anonymous05/24/14
Flowing seed
Wow, this was so sexy, made me soooo wet. Has to be one of my many fantasies
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Anonymous05/25/14
don't remove it
It was a harsher tone then your other work but there's no reason at all to remove it. Maybe you should put a disclaimer on the top of others that are so similar but don't let narrow minded people dictate your fantasies, or output. That is stifling. Write what you want to write, whatever gets your juices (creative and other) flowing. I'd rather read fifty stories that don't jibe with my taste then one that I felt was being constrained because a few people on the internet can't get behind it.
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Anonymous05/25/14
Agree...
I agree with many of the comments I've read here. Though this story is not my cup of tea, you should leave it up. The story could use a touch of editing, but it is still fairly well written and it should be shared. The fantasy is yours, not anyone else's, to dictate.
I also agree with the idea of adding a disclaimer, as I feel this story is a step apart from your Daddy, Lilly, and the Headmaster series. I came here after reading that one, and was caught a little off-guard when the violence was stepped up here. Don't let people shame you for your ideas, but maybe let them know what they are getting themselves into, especially if they have enjoyed your other work, which has a more caring/protective tone to it.
Either way, keep writing. You have some serious talent.
I appreciate all comments, THANK YOU, and i have decided to re-submit the story with a disclaimer. There is a second part to this story that had already been written which twists the story a little so its not as sordid as it may seem. Perhaps i should have posted both parts of the story together or explained a little earlier. I was just so taken aback by the negative comments to start with as i would never intentionally offend anyone.
Again, thank you for your comments and suggestions.
A good story. Ignore the thoughtless, politically correct reactions. Rape has its place in fiction, just as do all of the other things, horrible and otherwise, that we humans do for, and, yes, to, each other.
If you insist on including a disclaimer (and I think that would be a mistake), simply say that this particular story explores a facet of sexuality that isn't likely to turn people on very much because it has other fish to fry. Why no disclaimer? Because that would be too much like apologizing in advance for something that needs no apology.
Keep writing, and do it *your* way.
--CarlusMagnus
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Anonymous05/25/14
Keep it up.
While some may or may not like or approve of the way this happened it is your story, authored by you. It's good even though a bit more non-consensual than I would have liked. Lily You Rock keep it up. I look forward to more from your naughty mind.
For once a story with a huge bite of reality rather than the S.O.S. about the daughter being all hot, wet, ready and begging for daddy.
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Anonymous05/26/14
More
I want more of this story. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! Give more and harder!! I like it hard!!!
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Anonymous05/26/14
... I love this story. is there a part 2
Really great story and I like how the point of view was written. Ignore the haters. This story is really good and no one is making them read it. If they don't want to or think its wrong well, they can, GET THE HEL OFF.
Well written and HOT! Pay no attention to people who don't know how to "turn the channel" when they don't like something. I like the non-consent incest fantasy only stories. And this one rocks! Keep it up. I'd love to see Lily shared with her dad's friends.
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Anonymous05/27/14
Great story
I'm hoping for a part 2, just as nonconsentual as this one.
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more lily
daddy gets caught with lily by wife and joins in and maybe the boys
this is a great story
Okay, so daddy's a little rough and forceful as he's busting his baby girl's cherry. But it had to happen sooner or later, and it might as well be dad who does it. At first Lil's in shock, but I bet that very soon she gets to appreciate how good her father's fat veiny daddy-dick feels up her sweet little slit. That opens the flood gates, and her big brothers will be the beneficiaries of their baby sister's new found lust. Getting her to suck them off was fine, but now her cute little cunt will be permanently open for business for all the big hard cocks of her family. Jason and Chris will be blowing their brotherly balls up between their kid sis's legs, just like dad'll be shooting his huge loads of sperm, part of the same sperm that made her, up his darling girl's tight little twat. Lil'll love having her twat clogged by family sperm from family balls, she'll be over the moon having big family cocks pumping away and fucking the living shit out of her. Her cunt'll be communal property for all three horny family males, and she'll have her cunt pounded and slammed by family cock whenever and wherever the boys get the slightest urge.
Rape is still Rape
Drunken son of a bitch needs his balls cut off and the boys need a cock up their ass to see how it feels to be Raped!
Her slight lack of 'no' still makes it rape..
Yeah it reads like a rape fantasy.. Not the daddy/ daughter stuff usually on here and I'm glad this kind of story is in the minority. But it should be relabled as such.
Totally hot!
Well, I don't know about all them Grumpy Guses, but I liked it! Thank you.
SORRY!!!!!!
I truly apologise for the offence my story has caused and have requested its removal from the site. Not sure how long this takes but it is in the process. Again, my sincerest apologies.
Lily
Sucks.
I love this story. So what if all you butthurt idiots get offended. Some people LIKE this stuff, force, aggression, dominance. It's a part of some people's nature. I you don't like it, don't read it. She's not condoning actual rape.
But I actually loved this story, it contained a lot of fantasies I enjoy and I really hope you don't take it down. Fuck what they say you can write what you want! They can't just go around boycotting every rape fantasy that people express in a SAFE way!
Don't let anyone shame you for your fantasies!
I think it just could stand to be recategorized as nonconsent. But, I think it's kind of tame compared to lots of those stories. It's all fantasy! Tons of these incest (also a crime, mind you, you who complain!) stories center on non-consent. I might re-categorize it simply because it never changes to a pleasurable experience. I've seen that handled well with a simple disclaimer previous to the story. It's fair warning and if they still get offended, well they chose to read past the disclaimer.
People, this is an erotica story website...
If you do not like a story, stop reading it. No one is forcing you to do anything. You can do that with a click of the mouse! And those Anonymous people that leave negative and hurtful comments, how "real" are you? I have read hundreds of stories that I don't like for one reason or another and never leave hurtful comments. Click away and move on. Little Girl, you are a great writer, don't let the foolishness of a few get you down.
Why are you letting yourself be bullied?
If these anons don't like your story, it's just a click away for them to read something else. You wrote and posted this story in the honest belief you were writing something people will like, and the evidence is there; a lot of people do. OK, this type of story is not my thing, but I still think you have a right to post it as your honest work, and if some people don't like it, tough. Don't let yourself be bullied by a bunch of know-it-all dicks who've never had the gumption to actually create anything themselves, but are brave enough to attack you anonymously. Don't delete this story, enough people believe it has merit, listen to them as well.
OKAY....
You have a story that doesn't suit the taste of some people. (At least a couple signed their name to the compliant; that's more than the poison pen people usually do.) You like the story? You did the best you could? Don't pull it just because a few complained. Look at your score. Look at the comments; most are very favorable. Part of the problem with our country are those in the PC crowd who think all should comply with their wishes. NEWS FLASH! No one forced you to read it; you can either stop as soon as you see you don't like it or you can express your displeasure by voting low. You also have a right to comment, but don't you think the comment should be one that points out the problem? Yes, a few seemed to try and signed their name. Maybe you others should follow their lead.
LIL, STICK BY YOUR GUNS! DON'T PULL IT AND DO WRITE WHAT YOU LIKE.
I enjoyed this,,,it's incest mixed with non consent, but still good so stick to your guns and keep writing,,take note of the desenters but don't give in to them,,if they don't like it what the f*** are they doing on here in the first place.
Flowing seed
Wow, this was so sexy, made me soooo wet. Has to be one of my many fantasies
don't remove it
It was a harsher tone then your other work but there's no reason at all to remove it. Maybe you should put a disclaimer on the top of others that are so similar but don't let narrow minded people dictate your fantasies, or output. That is stifling. Write what you want to write, whatever gets your juices (creative and other) flowing. I'd rather read fifty stories that don't jibe with my taste then one that I felt was being constrained because a few people on the internet can't get behind it.
Agree...
I agree with many of the comments I've read here. Though this story is not my cup of tea, you should leave it up. The story could use a touch of editing, but it is still fairly well written and it should be shared. The fantasy is yours, not anyone else's, to dictate.
I also agree with the idea of adding a disclaimer, as I feel this story is a step apart from your Daddy, Lilly, and the Headmaster series. I came here after reading that one, and was caught a little off-guard when the violence was stepped up here. Don't let people shame you for your ideas, but maybe let them know what they are getting themselves into, especially if they have enjoyed your other work, which has a more caring/protective tone to it.
Either way, keep writing. You have some serious talent.
Disclaimer
I appreciate all comments, THANK YOU, and i have decided to re-submit the story with a disclaimer. There is a second part to this story that had already been written which twists the story a little so its not as sordid as it may seem. Perhaps i should have posted both parts of the story together or explained a little earlier. I was just so taken aback by the negative comments to start with as i would never intentionally offend anyone.
Again, thank you for your comments and suggestions.
Good!l Five stars!
A good story. Ignore the thoughtless, politically correct reactions. Rape has its place in fiction, just as do all of the other things, horrible and otherwise, that we humans do for, and, yes, to, each other.
If you insist on including a disclaimer (and I think that would be a mistake), simply say that this particular story explores a facet of sexuality that isn't likely to turn people on very much because it has other fish to fry. Why no disclaimer? Because that would be too much like apologizing in advance for something that needs no apology.
Keep writing, and do it *your* way.
--CarlusMagnus
Keep it up.
While some may or may not like or approve of the way this happened it is your story, authored by you. It's good even though a bit more non-consensual than I would have liked. Lily You Rock keep it up. I look forward to more from your naughty mind.
Hot Damn
Please continue, wow
Refreshing
For once a story with a huge bite of reality rather than the S.O.S. about the daughter being all hot, wet, ready and begging for daddy.
More
I want more of this story. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! Give more and harder!! I like it hard!!!
... I love this story. is there a part 2
Really great story and I like how the point of view was written. Ignore the haters. This story is really good and no one is making them read it. If they don't want to or think its wrong well, they can, GET THE HEL OFF.
Excellent Fantasy
Well written and HOT! Pay no attention to people who don't know how to "turn the channel" when they don't like something. I like the non-consent incest fantasy only stories. And this one rocks! Keep it up. I'd love to see Lily shared with her dad's friends.
Great story
I'm hoping for a part 2, just as nonconsentual as this one.
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