All Comments on 'Tommy - A Life Pt. 05'

by RolandQ

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EroticChocolateEroticChocolatealmost 10 years ago

Really wish the chapter was longer,but other wise very good.

judojonjudojonalmost 10 years ago

your doing a grew job love the way it is going but do hope Billy comes back into the story

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 10 years ago
I'm sorry

For tommy that he is letting himself be bullied into complying with these people.

I would like to hear about some of Billy's suffering due to the separation. Yes he provided for tommy but I want to know what his parents had that was big enough to make him do it

RolandQRolandQalmost 10 years agoAuthor
More romance and eventually answers to these questions

I'll be adding chapters over the next few days. You'll need to be patient, this is a story focused on Tommy, but I think all the story lines come back together. Thanks for reading.

Headhunter22Headhunter22almost 10 years ago
Love it!

Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more!!

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