All Comments on 'Lustful Lyrics Ch. 11'

by Sean Renaud

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pacifist91wpacifist91walmost 10 years ago
The way a pair of short shorts should be:

Long enough to cover the subject, short enough to keep it interesting! I'm not usually moved to write a comment for something that's purely straight, but you did a great job with the tension of the action and the personality of the heroine. Thanks for posting this great vignette.

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I'm a Veteran of the Iraq war and former Marine. To my Band of Brothers keep up the fight and remember there is life beyond the Corps. Love your time in it'll be the best time of your life. I love anything extreme and my mailbox being filled to the brim with feedback.

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