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Great start!
Insomnia has all the promise of a great story! Intriguing characters, wonderful descriptions, and a little suspense to leave readers wanting more (especially me!)
Great story
Looking forward to Chapter 2 with great expectations!
Very Nice!
I like the indirect buildup to the locked out scenario; cleaver and polished. I especially liked the bit about the cat staring helplessly out the window. Truly a delight. Thank you.
A lovely story!
I look forward to seeing where it goes. Well done - thank you for writing so well for us.
Five stars and more, please!
A great start
Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Well done and thank you, 5 stars from me!
When I got to the end my first thought was Prick, it's just getting good.
So despite my initial comment it seems to be a well written story that I have enjoyed so far and am looking forward to reading more.
Mike
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