All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 02: Nomination Ceremony'

This appears to be the start of a long story. I hope he gets to fully participate in all the club's activities.

but "excellent" and I look forward to more

... short!

I feel you should post two in the day as short as they are one in the morning one in the evening would make the series go just that much smoother

Lots of potential here for sure. So nice of the one commenter to let you know the schedule you should use for writing/posting! Geez!

Why would he behave in the manner he did? What would have him agreeing to their conditions? Way too short. Not worth the read.

This story line has great potential although it seems like more of a series than individual stories. If you keep putting WVC in the front that will help but you might want to start numbering them. I look forward to the next one(s)!

The people complaining they are too short are giving you a backhanded compliment.

I love the whole premise. Very original and creative. Lots of room to explore more. Great tones of sensual femdom and denial. Is a chastity device in his future? Hope to read more. Thanks for sharing!

j

Please read them on my Profile page

releasing a few paragraphs at a time, but not enough for a chapter, is annoying.

There's not much to say at this stage. I was pleased to find the same "voice" narrating

So enjoying being hard