This story line has great potential although it seems like more of a series than individual stories. If you keep putting WVC in the front that will help but you might want to start numbering them. I look forward to the next one(s)!
The people complaining they are too short are giving you a backhanded compliment.
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Anonymous05/26/14
Very Hot!
I love the whole premise. Very original and creative. Lots of room to explore more. Great tones of sensual femdom and denial. Is a chastity device in his future? Hope to read more. Thanks for sharing!
j
English
Interesting
This appears to be the start of a long story. I hope he gets to fully participate in all the club's activities.
what can I say...
but "excellent" and I look forward to more
Not bad, just ...
... short!
You should start posting more
I feel you should post two in the day as short as they are one in the morning one in the evening would make the series go just that much smoother
Keep it going!
Lots of potential here for sure. So nice of the one commenter to let you know the schedule you should use for writing/posting! Geez!
Too little background information
Why would he behave in the manner he did? What would have him agreeing to their conditions? Way too short. Not worth the read.
Ignore the negative comments
This story line has great potential although it seems like more of a series than individual stories. If you keep putting WVC in the front that will help but you might want to start numbering them. I look forward to the next one(s)!
The people complaining they are too short are giving you a backhanded compliment.
Very Hot!
I love the whole premise. Very original and creative. Lots of room to explore more. Great tones of sensual femdom and denial. Is a chastity device in his future? Hope to read more. Thanks for sharing!
j
WVC Notes
Please read them on my Profile page
ok already
releasing a few paragraphs at a time, but not enough for a chapter, is annoying.
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