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by greenmountaineer05/24/14

Made me think of Frost's "Nothing Gold Can Stay."

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by Tsotha05/26/14

Indeed, to one white hour, many months of grey. I've always loved the scent of Jasmine, but how quickly it blooms and withers... Interesting sounds and enjambment throughout the first two stanze (e.g., asphalt, white).

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