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whats 2 come
Hanging question of whats 2 come.... wait 2 read what follows next....
Great!
I love the idea! Just remember that Freya has just been invaded and has no idea if these 'people' are friend or foe. To much acceptance and you lose the entire point, after all would you drink a strange purple liquid handed to you from an alien that was just killing humans prior to capturing you.... I really can't wait for more to read! And I hope my criticism doesn't offend you. KEEP WRITING! !!
Thank you.
Thank you for commenting, and reading! The reason she was so acceptant of them was because she was too afraid to fight them, as well as the fact that they didn't kill her yet, so she thought maybe they were after something else.
But don't worry, she won't be so unafraid in chapter three.
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