Far too short, you are either a true sadist or a very good teasing dominant, leaving us poor eager subs wanting more desperately. (Neither a bad thing *chuckles*)
Please provide us with the next chapter soon, and maybe make it somewhat longer?
A very promising start to a very hot story.
I love the concept of your world, and Mr Stone shows promise.
One request: one page per chapter is simply too short! Please consider allowing your readers to build some angst to want to continue. I'm just afraid it is moving too slowly.
English
Way too short. Could hardly get into the spirit of things. Like the work!
Teasingly
Far too short, you are either a true sadist or a very good teasing dominant, leaving us poor eager subs wanting more desperately. (Neither a bad thing *chuckles*)
Please provide us with the next chapter soon, and maybe make it somewhat longer?
A very promising start to a very hot story.
Great
I love the concept of your world, and Mr Stone shows promise.
One request: one page per chapter is simply too short! Please consider allowing your readers to build some angst to want to continue. I'm just afraid it is moving too slowly.
Great job! Look forward to more.
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