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A Discovery Ch. 03

byGeorgieH©
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by Anonymous

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by ScattySue05/24/14

You teaser!

Very good but too short! Want more please.

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by Fullupwithit05/25/14

You have me drooling!

Very hot story! I loved the twist at the end of Ch 01 when you brought in Debbie. All I can say is MORE PLEASE!

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by Anonymous12/23/15

a wonderful story ...

this is such a wonderful story. This is probably the way we all would like to feel in our own life ... Naked and free and in Love ...

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by Randee195803/16/16

Agree

I agree with anonymous. What he states is exactly how I feel for life in general. Bravo!!!😍😘

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by BlueYonder6303/28/16

Fabulous

A lovely balance in your writing. The descriptions of their love making are so very hot, yet the description of their growing love is wonderfully heart warming.

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