Convincing Me Pt. 01

time waste

not romance tale, gay tale. call it what it is and stop wasting my time.

while i do agree it should be in the lesbian section,it was also a very good start.

Romance is universal

I believe your story is in the right place. I love it, so well written. Keep at it.

I'm convinced...

this is going to be a good story. I love the tension and the juxtaposition between the three characters. Although you can pretty much guess Tamara and the "alpha female" will hook up, it still doesn't deter you from wanting to know the how, when, what, and why of it all - kinda like watching a banana split being made, even tho you haven't tasted it, you know it's gonna be good. Mmm, and I can't wait for part two.

Nice start

Shrug off the troll comment. This cracked me up: "stop wasting my time" - as if someone had forced him to read this. What a jerk. Good start. You might want to use more contractions in dialogue so it sounds more like what people really sound like. Looking forward to reading more.