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Insomnia Ch. 02

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by mel_pomene05/25/14

This just keeps on getting better!

It was going to be hard to follow Chapter 1 of this story, but you have absolutely surpassed yourself with this second part. Very well done once again - and another five stars. Thank you.

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by FA_JF05/25/14

It's good and you build anticipation/sexual tension well. However, be careful of huge leaps that break the thread of suspension of disbelief for the readers. He unties her and she is already thinking in terms of 'her new master.' Damn, his magical cock is powerful if he hasn't even used it yet and she is ensorcelled. ;)

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by KatherineAlex05/25/14

This story holds real promise

Love this story and the premise. Keep up the good work. I would have loved to see a longer more meatier chapter though.

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