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by baikalisan05/30/14

Interesting

So far so good. Tho I'd like longer chapters if you could :)

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by Anonymous05/31/14

Well done!

I like how you have set this up! I look forward to later chapters!

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Confusing really. If it were up to me they wouldn't teach her to fight just how to have sex and pop babes out. I know call me sexist but that's the kind of survival story I like to read. Like The Prestest or Slave of the Servants. This one has promise though

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