Short but very good! I love the way the story is progressing and was a very happy girl this morning when i found this next chapter. Patience has never been my strong point, but it was worth waiting for.
I feel for David and Mya and look forward to discovering where they go from here, back to the top of the hotel for more fun I'm hoping!
Have 5 stars and a favourite
To short but fun ,
please make the chapters longer ,you just get your teeth into them and then they are gone ,i like what youve written i just want there to be more of it please ,
looking forward to the next chapter very much
Thank You
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Anonymous05/28/14
A nice start
I like this story, It shows promise but for as intense as they feel about one another, I'm wondering what the basis for the attraction is. It would make more sense or be a richer experience if we knew more about them and their relationship/attraction to one another. David said she was in her own league. Is this purely physical? Why does he NEED Mya to be HIS as opposed to any other woman at the hotel? And I'm wondering what is in Mya's profile that explains why she is attracted to Dom/Sub lifestyle? What void does David fulfill in her life? I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait to know more about your characters.
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Teasingly
Short but very good! I love the way the story is progressing and was a very happy girl this morning when i found this next chapter. Patience has never been my strong point, but it was worth waiting for.
I feel for David and Mya and look forward to discovering where they go from here, back to the top of the hotel for more fun I'm hoping!
Have 5 stars and a favourite
More Please
To short but fun ,
please make the chapters longer ,you just get your teeth into them and then they are gone ,i like what youve written i just want there to be more of it please ,
looking forward to the next chapter very much
Thank You
A nice start
I like this story, It shows promise but for as intense as they feel about one another, I'm wondering what the basis for the attraction is. It would make more sense or be a richer experience if we knew more about them and their relationship/attraction to one another. David said she was in her own league. Is this purely physical? Why does he NEED Mya to be HIS as opposed to any other woman at the hotel? And I'm wondering what is in Mya's profile that explains why she is attracted to Dom/Sub lifestyle? What void does David fulfill in her life? I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait to know more about your characters.
Its been a long time, over 2 months.
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