He wishes she had large breast ans lies about it to make story better
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Anonymous05/27/14
Crap
There has been so much of it lately. Perhaps I look too often but I don't want to miss the good stuff. As I went to submit my comment, the security code came up as
85DD. Another ridiculous tit size story!!
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Anonymous05/27/14
Worse than crap
It must be half-term in school again.
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Anonymous05/27/14
42DD
And they stuck straight out. Nipples were an inch long. She was 55, but looked 23. Did I miss anything? Of course she felt tight as a virgin, because he had an 11 inch cock. Flush
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Anonymous05/28/14
Terrible
This was one of the worst stories I have read on Literotica.
Your storytelling lacks major flow. It seems like a decent first-time attempt, but your future works need detail (names, dialogue, back story). Don't be in such a rush to get to the end; SAVOR the story.
Juvenile.
Juvenile obsession with big tits; 42 DD indeed.
boob envy
He wishes she had large breast ans lies about it to make story better
Crap
There has been so much of it lately. Perhaps I look too often but I don't want to miss the good stuff. As I went to submit my comment, the security code came up as
85DD. Another ridiculous tit size story!!
Worse than crap
It must be half-term in school again.
42DD
And they stuck straight out. Nipples were an inch long. She was 55, but looked 23. Did I miss anything? Of course she felt tight as a virgin, because he had an 11 inch cock. Flush
Terrible
This was one of the worst stories I have read on Literotica.
This story needs work
Your storytelling lacks major flow. It seems like a decent first-time attempt, but your future works need detail (names, dialogue, back story). Don't be in such a rush to get to the end; SAVOR the story.
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