Sisters, Friends, and Lovers

okay

I can see a nice long term relationship with the 3 of them.
However, if they swing/open relationship - bring in others, I doubt it will last.
The emotional balance needed for a long term bond would break.

Greta writing. Story is very engaging.

I do thing parents would be a little bit less pleased about the situation though.

WOW

This is very utopia like. A family plus one discussing and working out a very emotional situation in a civilised manner. Unfortunately I have never found the human race to be civilised.
However I have found your story is very entertaining and interesting and to be fascinating. I am very much enjoying it.
Please continue.
Thankyou

The Parents

Somehow, I sense that the parents will be involved with this. They were way too OK with the situation to not be getting involved. Can't wait!

30 chapters?

I don't think I will follow those.

I Don't Give 5 Stars Very Often...

but you get one for this story. I eagerly await more. Great start!

Absolutely great story!

I will be looking forward to reading all 30 chapters!

not momogamus

I can't handle poly armory.

Terrific tale

I can see how this situation could happen. It's good that they're older. if they were too young I couldn't see the sisters being so easy with it.
To last annony. Ummm, this is the group sex category. Yu won't find a lot of monogamous relationships in here.

definition

Good story, but one turn off for me. I cannot tell Fran from Shelia. I know Alison is cuming too--willshe be the same too?

Dillon MA? Romantic1?

Just a new ID?

Liked

The way everything came together. He was thinking I am Dead. to only find he was living a Dream.

Apparently the anon that 'can't handle' can't spell either. How do you know what you don't like when you can't even spell it? ...or are they typos because you were only using one hand? ;)

Who hasn't dreamed of doing two sisters or brothers, especially someone reading here? ...now I don't know if I could *live* with two women... (Ducking;)

Interested

It's certainly got my attention even if I do have a few quibbles.

There are parts of the dialog that feel awkward, but that might just be a regional or even personal thing. There are some interactions that seem forced instead of natural as well.

Really like the tone and realistic reaction of characters

I really like the tone that you've established for the story, the self-awareness of the three principal characters. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!