Lovely first submission. Very erotic. Please don't take too long in submitting the second.
An excellent first story, hope you continue writing as i would enjoy seeing where this story goes. 5 stars to encourage you
Very good first chapter and am riveted to find out how she fares the 2nd time around. Keep up the good work!
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Lovely first submission.
Very erotic.
Please don't take too long in submitting the second.
Loved it
An excellent first story, hope you continue writing as i would enjoy seeing where this story goes.
5 stars to encourage you
Loved the suspense you built up
Very good first chapter and am riveted to find out how she fares the 2nd time around. Keep up the good work!
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