The Flynn's Experiment

Very Thoughtful

This was really well thought out and no-one loses their dignity or self-respect. Great work.

Excellent

What a beautiful, sensitive story.

Another great read.

Well thought out, all the way to the end. I eagerly await every story by Ms. Beck.

Another

Another sexy, intelligent, sensitive and well-written story from the fabulous Ms. Beck

Thank you

Overwhelming. Well wrought. Inspiring.

BRAVO !!!

Great story with great emotions.

THIS IS NOT AN EXPERIMENT

only an exercise in futility. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good story

It would be nice that Anthony should go back to his nice job. And this time Mr Flynn will allow Mrs. Flynn and Anthony to have sexual intercourse in the room by themselves without him joining and watching. It would be a romantic fucking while they look at each other's eyes and actually kissing.

Nice job

I enjoyed this well-written story. I like your development of the characters and the unique aspects of the plot. Nicely creative and also erotic.

Intelligent & Sexy

A sexy story that really makes you think, what would you do if you were in that position. Looking forward to the next story.

Not for Everyone

If you're looking for a stroke-story, look elsewhere. If you're looking for something to challenge your preconceptions and stimulate something more than just your nether parts - this one will reward you (and probably stimulate those nether parts as well). A difficult subject developed sensitively and realistically.

Love is Different for Everyone

I liked this story a lot. I believe the author gave her characters "character" and the concept is probably one that is more real in our world then we think. For those who chose to tell the author what she should or should not have done, you fail the test. The author's story is beautiful as is, and the fact that Anthony left is understandable. We are told to think that sex can just be sex, but in truth, for Anthony and for Mrs Flynn it was more then that. Mrs. Flynn was able to use a "body" to remain close to her husband, the body learned that it needed more. Just wonderfully written. Thanks

Brave Husband

A good story dealing with a very real situation. I wonder what I would do in the husbands situation or in my partner was in a wheel chair !
It makes you think about all the poor service personnel injured while serving their country.

Food for thought this story !

wow more please

I really loved this story It is well written and I felt like it could be a true story keep writing You have a fan in me.

so tell me is it a true story?

Enjoyed this

A good window into a difficult situation and the feelings and thoughts associated. The only fault I have is with the ending. Not how it ended, but the point you chose to end it. I feel like going further to give us insight into the wife's thinking in calling off the experiment would have been better than simply telling us she did. The story, up to that point, focused on her thoughts, feelings, wrestlings with her husbands plan. Yet in the end, the reader is closed off from that and we only have Anthony's thoughts and wrestlings. I am glad you included his side. I just wish you would have went further.

PS

Five stars. Filled with emotion. Very well written.

A great story

Most of the loving wives stories feel like from Playboy magazine of years ago. This is so much better, the emotions feel real and you can understand why all sides come to the decisions they make.
You have a real talent for story telling, made better for the proper English and very few errors/typos. I look forward to many more stories in the future.

Well written

So well written I could see it in my mind.

Different

This is unlike anything I've read here. Not the kind of situation I'd expect to read about. I can't say I liked or disliked it. I'll just give it a no comment. Also, no rating.

I Don't Think So

How is this even remotely "romantic"? Robert FORCES his wife to have sex with another man? Pimps her out actually. Some other category, perhaps. Not romance.
Booooooo!

My Error

I have to correct myself. This story is not listed as "Romance," ergo much of my comment does not apply.
But I still dislike adultery--in stories or in real life.
Nonetheless Donna, you do write well, and draw your characters well.

Masterful

Difficult situation but sensitively handled. The feelings of the three main characters are variously presented with Mrs Flynn finally succumbing and opening up to satisfy husband Robert and herself. Ultimately, Anthony found his job and the unlikely extras were a double-edged sword. Another masterful, sweeping drama from Donna.

Sensitive, YES! Sexy, YES!

You took a delicate situation, gave it likeable and sympathetic characters, added a twist and some hot hot sex, while retaining the poignancy that made it even hotter.
Congratulations on a stimulating story which builds the mind and satisfies the body!

This one

just kept getting better. Well done, DB. I found this one because I was searching for LW "cheating" stories. That was not an appropriate tag for this story, but it worked out fine for me.

Mindless and talentless drivel !

There are very, very few female writers on this site whom are any good.
This is NOT one of them ! "1*" !!

Original storyline. Not quite sure how I feel about it.

I did get the anticipation factor from this, but I did not quite get full release. On one hand, the story was well discribed with fully believable characters. I just cant help thinking, of all 3 people, not one of them was fully satisfied. I like my sex stories to have a climax. Preferably into a hot redheads mouth, who is slick with sweat. This one left me feeling abit empty.

Original, perceptive and richly developed

This is a wonderful story. Please do not be put off by negative comments from readers who have a preconceived notion of what plot a "loving wives" story should have. Emily is a living definition of "loving wife." More importantly, your characters are real. While trapped in an agonizing situation, they find ways to affirm themselves and their spouse. Even Anthony is portrayed as a person of depth and morality. Your writing is both skillful and insightful. I'll keep my eye out for your work in the future and expect to see you published in the mainstream. Congratulations!!

Good read

Literate writing and a well told story. Using a different voice for Anthony interrupted the smooth flow of the narrative, however. Mostly free of punctuation and grammar errors, and only a few clunky sentences that required rereading to get the correct meaning. This is a difficult story to convincingly tell. Most writers would probably have turned the ending into an orgy, but the restrained ending adds to the feeling of veracity and makes me wonder if this was based on a true story. I'll go read your other stuff. Good work.

I loved this story!

Was this your first on Literotica? If so...WOW! I loved it all - the timing, the descriptions, the romantic feeling, and the sex. Great work!
Tracy

A very fine story

Addressing a difficult situation between two people, who love each other. In your other stories you do the same. Donna, this makes you so different from most of the writers on this site.
sanser6

Paralised

I have a good friend who was a diver,to make this short he got paralised : caisson ilness,it took the couple a lot of discussions to come to the point that they chose a guy the both know and liked to have sex with his wife on a not so regular base,only when she really felt the need she and the guy would come together,this lasted for about 20 years untill after her menopause she gave up sex all together,they are wel into theyr 60 years now and i never met a better and loving couple

Very Good

Your first incursion in Loving Wives is Very Good - 5.

Interesting slice of life

Excellent effort in the LW category. More please.

Liked it

Not a standard cookie cutter story. And not a typical everybody and there brother, sister and hair stylist is in it. Liked that it wasn't what I expected. Thank you.

Very sensitive. Very real.

My own experience somewhat like this
was with a VERY loving couple...
responding to his weak heart condition.
They couldn't have been more sweet,loving, and encouraging!