It could have been longer, especially if there is another good breaking place on the horizon.
More details, such as how Cole and Jenny woke up or at least roused up. Looking forward to chap 3 and to what Alice will do with the photo.
When is she going to remember she's not on the pill? Thanks.
Hmm..Alice is a great girl...but more detail please..
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A very good second chapter. 4 stars.
It could have been longer, especially if there is another good breaking place on the horizon.
More Detail,Please
More details, such as how Cole and Jenny woke up or at least roused up. Looking forward to chap 3 and to what Alice will do with the photo.
Neighbor
When is she going to remember she's not on the pill? Thanks.
More please...
Hmm..Alice is a great girl...but more detail please..
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