It's Just Exercise

Total fantasy.

A total fantasy. Not realistic at all.

...I like that.

rj

GUILTY PEOPLE ALWAYS GET CAUGHT

and with his "Don't tell my mommy attitude",he fits the bill. TK U MLJ LV NV

you should have given

the she's a round heel slut warning and can't be raped warning. I douche after my husband but wanted to get pregnant by my rapist. Yeah sounds like rape HUH.

A light hearted Fantasy

I have to admit that none of your characters caught my sympathy but if was a fun ride.

.....and they all lived happily ever after!

surprised there aren't mor comments on this one

Amusing little fantasy. No likable characters, but still a good story.

What gatorhermit said.

No likeable characters after he decided to rape the BFB (Best Friend Bitch). He lowered himself to their level.

3 Stars. Well written as usual, but this was just messed up.

He's no better than Amanda...

Both are cheaters. To hell with them both. Thanks for the story.

Ignite the reader's emotions

Fine job of igniting the natives emotions. One of the joys of writing is response to what you've written, is it not?
Story flowed well and no glaring errors noticed.
I even like the story line, that Amanda got herself a cheating husband as permanent punishment for beginning the infidelity within the marriage.
It just seems just, that's all.
Thanks for writing. 5*.
Best regards,
-Pultoy

Disappointing on so many levels

The story began stiff and stilted, flow was completely off. The insistence on making us comprehend field hockey and his sport was so overwrought. Reads like a first draft.

Very poorly done

Disappointing by your previous standards. Not a single decent character in the lot. And why he decided to rape Gina when he found his wife cheating is a complete mystery. The worst part of this whole thing was that it was "flat". I didn't get upset when he found his wife cheating. I didn't get upset when he raped Gina nor when she turned up in his office pregnant. The writing simply wasn't compelling enough to create any real interest in the bums. His actions, especially, made no sense given his character that you laid out. Sorry, maybe next time.

delightful!

Very well done. Believable characters and realistic actions. Thanks for writing!

My apologies !

I meant to click five stars but hit four accidentally because unsteady forefinger caused by laughing and appreciation of the author's amoral and borderline sociopathic sense of humor. Please don't hurt me.

Too rough for my taste.

And, in my opinion, unrealistic but what do I know?

Hey...

... It's just exercise, right?

More bad actors than good -

All of them are far less than good people - but they seem happyish - Amanda and Chauncey would go ballistic but they started it.

They call it Fiction for a reason

I guess if you are looking for stories that are somewhat close to reality you should choose another author.... . ......I know I will!!

This was insane

But incredibly fun to read!