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Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/14

great work

The only part I didnt like was the discussion about allowing others sexual involvement.

This could work well for them long term. But if they want long term, allowing others especially other men, would destroy them.

A marriage of this type does well for the partners and eventual children if they are stable. Look at history/cultures that had this type of relationship. No, adding others once they stabilize would be damaging.

I like the way you are building a nice world view and their personalities.

The story is flowing well, excellent writing. Good creativity.

Well done so far, awaiting the next chapter.

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by Rawmaster6005/29/14

Nicely evolving story

The situation among the siblings and Steve sounds interesting and a great fantasy to explore. Now one guy and several women is an interesting situation and I know it happens, with or without societies approval. I will enjoy your story as it grows.
But I have to look to see if there are any stories where there are more men then women involved in a family situation. Going from "Proposition 31" to "The Moon Is A Harsh Mistress". type of story. (Yes I know Proposition 31 was more of a serial marriage with many partners, but fairly equal numbers of males and females) But I do find the idea interesting. Keep up the good work 5 stars

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by iluvsecs06/12/14

I'm enjoying the story but to me its more of a novel than an erotic story

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