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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/30/14

So-So

Watch your pronouns - you have Him tie her hands, and then She is taking ice cream out of a shopping bag. "Bad girls don't get treats"??? Then he should have pulled out and made her watch as he "wasted" his cum.

Personally, if *I* were that Master and MY property went off and screwed a fraternity while drunk, I wouldn't let her near me again until she tested clear for all the usual never-get-overs!

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by sandymonroe05/30/14

IT was good for an intro but failed as a complete story.

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