That was such a hot story. Well written and the timing was correct. Everything lead up to something else but without rising it. By the time I finished reading it, my panties were soaked. I had to masturbate immediately after reading it. I really loved that story.
To be continued... when the original author finally continues it. Word for word rip-off. Not even a tiny doubt. I began reading, recognized it instantly, and looked for the details I remembered: The sister getting off during her endorphin rush, going down to the basement, getting caught by the sister, her injury. What excuse can you possibly have?
Do you guys really not pay attention? This is the same author of the original stories. He took down all his stories cause of haters who rag on authors like him as though he actually condones actions like these, when he doesn't. Now he's decided to put some of them back up and we're lucky he did. So stop claiming this is someone trying to ripoff the same stories. Really would love to see the look on the faces of those who submit a complaint to literotica only to get a reply that its the original author.
Frankly, I'd rather see people jumping on the bandwagon when it's unclear whether or not there's an example of an author reposting works, for whatever reason, or some asshole blatantly ripping off someone else's work. If this is the original author reposting, I'll ask the obvious questions: Why, exactly? And why not add a paragraph at the beginning of the story, letting readers know it's not necessary to cry foul? And why didn't you include the NEXT part of this story, instead of ending it in the exact place it's sat for, what? A year or so?
You know if you really thought this was stolen, you could at least go to my profile where you would see an explanation of why this is being reposted. Just a suggestion...
I immediately recognized the story title and so went to the comments to learn what the deal was. I don't recall if there was a second chapter, but it does seem like there was. Or, maybe, that's just wishful thinking on my part.
I hope, Cphucker, that you will post many more of your old stories as well as new ones.
What an amazing story, and so well written. I wondered how you keep your hands on the computer while you typed the story. You must have great self control, or was there semen all over the keys!!!
As I recall, there's at least 4 chapters to this story, maybe 5
This was one of my faves the first time around last year, and I was really disappointed when this author took it down for reasons best known to himself. For all you "Plagiarism!" screamers out there, for the last time, this is the original author, re-posting his own work (which he's allowed to do), so maybe you lot should work on your goldfish-like memory span before making fools of yourselves with unfounded and easily disprovable accusations.
I loved this story the first time and now all the chapters are in one now! I can't wait for the new chapters of this story to read more of their adventures together!
Keep up the good work!
A very nice story indeed but u increased the pace. You could have separately and secretly fucked both of them and then had threesome. I guess it would have been a lot better
The pace does not relent. That isn't to say the story lack substance - it does. It's just moves along at a frenetic pace from start to finish. Very enjoyable.
That should get him ready? Eh? Uh, if he's still hard I think he's pretty ready to fuck her tight pussy and fill it up now!
This story is coming along really nicely :)
I seem to recall there used to be a few chapters in this storyline.
Did you combine the various chapters to consolidate the story into the one submission we have now? Were they deleted, and if so, was it your idea? And do you plan on continuing this storyline? You did end with "To be continued..."
By far my favorite story of yours. Read it a few times now already and it never gets old.
I find the contrast of character between the sisters particularly stimulating (Bree's adventurous innocence versus Marie's more collected manner). The way you portray the escalation between all of them seems incredibly natural. The pace is fast, but the expressions of disbelief from the main character keep the story grounded. And this is essential, they are just *that* appropiately placed, and delivered in such a way that feels sympathetic, instead of stupid or corny (which usually achieve the opposite effect).
You left the door open for more at the end. It's been a long time, but personally I'd love to see a sequel to this. I think there's enough possibilites still left to be explored by the siblings!
Will there be more? Thus far has been a wonderful ride. I've reread your story at least 4 or 5 times and I am hoping there's more chapters in the making.
I really enjoyed this story. I especially liked how it was an on going exploration of feelings as well as sexual. I really would like to read the continuation of this story. Please consider adding a few more chapters, please.
Cphucker, you are amazing at capturing your readers attention. Truly great work! Will you by any chance be continuing the story? If you should need help with the story line i am more than willing to give it.
Best of Luck,
Icarus93
English
OMG
That was such a hot story. Well written and the timing was correct. Everything lead up to something else but without rising it. By the time I finished reading it, my panties were soaked. I had to masturbate immediately after reading it. I really loved that story.
Either stolen or a reprint.
You either stole this or it's a word for word reprint.
?
To be continued... when the original author finally continues it. Word for word rip-off. Not even a tiny doubt. I began reading, recognized it instantly, and looked for the details I remembered: The sister getting off during her endorphin rush, going down to the basement, getting caught by the sister, her injury. What excuse can you possibly have?
I have seen this story before on the same site...
Reposts
Near as I can tell, this is the original author just reposting their work. And it's pretty good work.
Thumbs up
Yea, the author is just reposting some of his classics.
Good!
I'm glad to see you've come back, and I hope you'll continue to produce your good stuff.
Same exact author
Do you guys really not pay attention? This is the same author of the original stories. He took down all his stories cause of haters who rag on authors like him as though he actually condones actions like these, when he doesn't. Now he's decided to put some of them back up and we're lucky he did. So stop claiming this is someone trying to ripoff the same stories. Really would love to see the look on the faces of those who submit a complaint to literotica only to get a reply that its the original author.
Regarding cries of plagiarism:
Frankly, I'd rather see people jumping on the bandwagon when it's unclear whether or not there's an example of an author reposting works, for whatever reason, or some asshole blatantly ripping off someone else's work. If this is the original author reposting, I'll ask the obvious questions: Why, exactly? And why not add a paragraph at the beginning of the story, letting readers know it's not necessary to cry foul? And why didn't you include the NEXT part of this story, instead of ending it in the exact place it's sat for, what? A year or so?
Plagiarism
You know if you really thought this was stolen, you could at least go to my profile where you would see an explanation of why this is being reposted. Just a suggestion...
Loved it again!
Loved it the first time...the whole series...loving it again! This whole story is HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
Great Story! 5 Stars
First time reading this. Hope you upload part 2 soon. You would probably dig my stories as well since they have a similar incestuous bent.
Just s good the second time around!
I immediately recognized the story title and so went to the comments to learn what the deal was. I don't recall if there was a second chapter, but it does seem like there was. Or, maybe, that's just wishful thinking on my part.
I hope, Cphucker, that you will post many more of your old stories as well as new ones.
Wow!! That was good!!
What an amazing story, and so well written. I wondered how you keep your hands on the computer while you typed the story. You must have great self control, or was there semen all over the keys!!!
Nice story. Plagiarism or not, its a hot story. As author says it is his own work then it is. no need to keep on pulling at it.
As I recall, there's at least 4 chapters to this story, maybe 5
This was one of my faves the first time around last year, and I was really disappointed when this author took it down for reasons best known to himself. For all you "Plagiarism!" screamers out there, for the last time, this is the original author, re-posting his own work (which he's allowed to do), so maybe you lot should work on your goldfish-like memory span before making fools of yourselves with unfounded and easily disprovable accusations.
Fantastic
Omg! This story was amazing! So unbelievably wet right now!
Great story!
I loved this story the first time and now all the chapters are in one now! I can't wait for the new chapters of this story to read more of their adventures together!
Keep up the good work!
Fantastic
Really great read, I love the build up and the quality writing. I look forward to seeing more!
OK so I'm a slowpoke.
Is 'slow-poke' quite the correct expression to use here.
What I meant to say was I just discovered a wonderful bit of erotica and I loved it.
Amazing Entry
Loved every moment. Great build up and progression! Can't wait for more!
Great story
Please don't make us wait too long :-)
Great story
cant wait for more
Nice But you increased the pace
A very nice story indeed but u increased the pace. You could have separately and secretly fucked both of them and then had threesome. I guess it would have been a lot better
When?
So when's the continuation? Please write more on this story line, it's the highest rated story you have and my personal favorite by far.
Outstanding Pacing
The pace does not relent. That isn't to say the story lack substance - it does. It's just moves along at a frenetic pace from start to finish. Very enjoyable.
Very hot
Great story and one that crys for a sequal
Love it!
Im a huge fan of your stories, cant wait for more Behind The Shed!
i can't wait to read more on Behind The Shed. and i hope he get to cum in Bree's pussy even if she son the pill or not on the pill.
More Behind The Shed
Would love to read more of this.
That should get him ready? Eh? Uh, if he's still hard I think he's pretty ready to fuck her tight pussy and fill it up now!
This story is coming along really nicely :)
I seem to recall there used to be a few chapters in this storyline.
Did you combine the various chapters to consolidate the story into the one submission we have now? Were they deleted, and if so, was it your idea? And do you plan on continuing this storyline? You did end with "To be continued..."
Will there be more?
This is truly an amazing story, I hope to read more. It's shaping up quite nicely
More please!
By far my favorite story of yours. Read it a few times now already and it never gets old.
I find the contrast of character between the sisters particularly stimulating (Bree's adventurous innocence versus Marie's more collected manner). The way you portray the escalation between all of them seems incredibly natural. The pace is fast, but the expressions of disbelief from the main character keep the story grounded. And this is essential, they are just *that* appropiately placed, and delivered in such a way that feels sympathetic, instead of stupid or corny (which usually achieve the opposite effect).
You left the door open for more at the end. It's been a long time, but personally I'd love to see a sequel to this. I think there's enough possibilites still left to be explored by the siblings!
Really hot
This is a really hot story, I can't hardly wait for you to write the continuation. Please don't make us wait too long.
Is there more?
Will there be more? Thus far has been a wonderful ride. I've reread your story at least 4 or 5 times and I am hoping there's more chapters in the making.
Please Can We Have Some More????
I really enjoyed this story. I especially liked how it was an on going exploration of feelings as well as sexual. I really would like to read the continuation of this story. Please consider adding a few more chapters, please.
10/10
This story made me come a dozen times it was well written excellent work. Please please please make another one. One of the best stories on the web.
ummmmm great story ! please continue
Great Story!!
Cphucker, you are amazing at capturing your readers attention. Truly great work! Will you by any chance be continuing the story? If you should need help with the story line i am more than willing to give it.
Best of Luck,
Icarus93
Very Well Written.
Great story. Very natural build up. All the actions finally justified.Very good story.I am very Impressed.Should have concluded it here.
HOT
VERY HOTT
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