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well wrote. can't wait to read more.
This is a cute story can't wait for chapter 3!!!
I love the build up of this story and the chemistry of the character! Great writing can't wait for more!
appears to be the beginning of a great story!
Your writing is absolutely spectacular! The proofreading was excellent (I didn't pick up on anything) and your writing flows really well. The characters are well-crafted too and quite likeable. Looking forward to future chapters. Noticed that some people were giving you grief for posting in the 'romance' section earlier. You'll probably find a much warmer welcome here. (:
Too Cute
Nice story. Too cute for words!
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