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Liked that
Wicked dialogue
That was hot!
Well done. I don't normally care for stories that start in the middle of a sex scene, but you pulled it off skillfully. It works because that scene sets up everything that follows. And what can I say about Gloria's internal dialogue? At first I thought it was over the top and she was being unduly hard on herself. But by the end of the story it became a self-fulfilling prophecy. More than that, it proved to be a framework for the entire story. This one held together from start to finish, tightly woven with hot sex, a hint of mystery, and an entire cast of unsavory characters taking pleasure in their disgusting behavior. I can't wait to read the next installment.
Dirty
LOVED THIS!! Can't wait for more!!
Wonderful
You have a real skill! From the first word to the last you had me. This is a hot story and you have me craving a taste of Gloria myself!
thanks!
Thank you! The next part should be up before the weekend. I hope you like it!
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