It is like a Christmas present, your words flow so smoothly, the action seems so innocent and pure. I love how you are taking this story and gently opening up the characters. It all seems so beautiful with the two of them. I do look forward to the next present to be opened. You write so well.
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Anonymous07/07/14
Great Followup
Great followup, logical progression, very good detailing, not too long, a super hot read. Thanks
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Amazing!
I LOVED IT! It turned me on and made my pussy wet….BIG TIME. lol 😊💦😘
English
eager and waiting anxiously
Please hurry with the next part to this story. It is so tantalizingly good. I can't wait to read what happens next.
So Good!
It is like a Christmas present, your words flow so smoothly, the action seems so innocent and pure. I love how you are taking this story and gently opening up the characters. It all seems so beautiful with the two of them. I do look forward to the next present to be opened. You write so well.
Great Followup
Great followup, logical progression, very good detailing, not too long, a super hot read. Thanks
Amazing!
I LOVED IT! It turned me on and made my pussy wet….BIG TIME. lol 😊💦😘
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