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Got me going...
I enjoyed this story. I'd like to see another chapter. I think you could draw it out longer if you added some detail. Take your time describing each scene. Give the reader time to enjoy each action. ;) Can't wait to see more. Cheers.
An excellent story ...
... particularly as it was a first submission. You told a good story competently, but try not to rush too much to a conclusion - most of us here appreciate a little tease now and then ;) !
Thank you for a good beginning, welcome to Literotica, please write more - and you may have five stars for this one!
Interesting Submission
You certainly explore the sadism niche well in this story. Whipping you definitely brings out the lust in your boyfriend. I would like to read more detail about how the punishments humiliate you while giving him excitement. My particular predilection is whipping your pussy....with a riding crop? I'd like more on that, how he did it, what the effect was on you as each stroke whipped into the tender flesh of your vulva. Did he get even harder as you arched your back in pain/pleasure with each stroke? A girl writhing in pain for her master can be VERY erotic!
wow
loved this story it made me cum quite a few times
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