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I don't know how you do it
Less story this time, but twice the perversion. You are doing a wonderful job of straddling the line between what I find repulsive and what I can't stop reading. Joe takes liberties that I would never consider; I find it especially interesting that he does it behind his wife's back (as if there were any other way). As much as I admire Joe the pervert, the star of this story is Gloria the little slut. She keeps finding new ways to surprise me. I don't know why this wasn't chapter 1 instead of 2, but I'll trust that there is a method to the madness. Short and sweet, but great job.
thanks soflabbwlvr!
I appreciate the kind words. I will have to get the final part up soon. I will be interested in your assessment of the structure. These were very much written as individual stories and I gave some thought to how to order them. It didn't feel like chronological would be the thing that would work best for me. I'm very interested in your analysis.
The next part should be up before the weekend. I hope you like it!
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