Good set-up! I hope you continue. The shattered whiskey glass was a nice plot point. I like the edginess and unpredictability of the uncle character.
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Anonymous06/01/14
Nice start
The tension and feelings are real. Quite a few young women are careless with dress around Uncles. Others tease on purpose. It is very difficult to control desire.
English
good start
We need more of this story!!!
Misleading title
He hasn't yet really claimed her, so I hope this is part one. It is always a shame when a hot well written story turns out to be a tease.
Good set-up! I hope you continue. The shattered whiskey glass was a nice plot point. I like the edginess and unpredictability of the uncle character.
Nice start
The tension and feelings are real. Quite a few young women are careless with dress around Uncles. Others tease on purpose. It is very difficult to control desire.
Yes pleeeease more, got me so wet
Nice Beginning
Would definitely like to see you continue this story.
Damn it!
That was hot. Extremely hot. More please!!!!
More please
Damn I'm dripping, thought for sure he would take his niece's cherry.
I was so hoping for a page two...so good.
Wattpad
You should write this story on Wattpad. You'll get more reads as well as votes and reviews!
Great start
Look forward to reading the rest of the series.
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