All Comments on 'Leabing Naomi'

LEABING? Fuck, should have known by the mistake in the title that this would be a poorly written story, well actually, you can't call it a story really.

The story didn't work for me there was no drama, no emotion, no action, nothing happened therefore no story, Why they fucked I don't know, Why she gave away money to her ex made no sense either.

Oh well try try again

Yes short and to the point.

Negative Nancies aside, even with the questions unanswered, it was by no means badly written. Could stand to be longer, but still better written than some e-books I have on my reader.

Damn good