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by Anonymous06/01/14

LEABING? Fuck, should have known by the mistake in the title that this would be a poorly written story, well actually, you can't call it a story really.

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by Anonymous06/03/14

Not so much

The story didn't work for me there was no drama, no emotion, no action, nothing happened therefore no story, Why they fucked I don't know, Why she gave away money to her ex made no sense either.
Oh well try try again

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