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Best story ever
Best story ever . Just a suggestion make so the mom comes back and find them in bed and they get in a big fight and moms lesbian things comes out and dad divorces her and settle down with the daughter thank you it was a good read so far kept it up
Great
First of all I read all three and they were Awesome :) how about making Vic pregnant and maybe a 3some with mom. Can't wait to read some more. Please don't make us wait too long.
I love this story
I love what you are doing and how you are handling it. Ignore the "anon" and write YOUR story. I know you've got the erotic mind and the capability to write a well stitched tale. Let it be you, let the others write their own stories. This initial coupling, after the mutual oral actions was so well done. I felt I was in the room with them. I can't wait to see more of this and more of what you have to offer.
want more...
I love this story. It's amazing and incredibly written. Please hurry with the next installment. Five stars.
Short, sweet and to the point
Short, sweet but to the point. That about covers it. I hate it when wives cheat on good men that don't deserve being treated like that. Odd I guess considering how many affairs I've had with married women. I'm not a horrible hypocrite, all of their husbands treated them like carp and didn't deserve to so much as kiss their feet, but still. Anyway, you are managing to cram a lot of story into a small space. I look forward to reading more of your work as time passes and specially longer ones. Keep writing!
Beautiful
Thank you, this part fulfills the natural order of things as Alan and Victoria couple. I think the key phrase is "I love you Victoria" as Alan realized their connection. You write so well, thank you
Lovely
Love your writing style! pure and passionate...
Thank you!
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