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by Anonymous06/03/14

bad spelling

Use an international dictionary as many common words are spelled differently. Like "center" not 'centre' makes for harder reading for those in the international community otherwise.

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by Anonymous06/12/14

Interesting

Thats the first story I've read from that angle, the reader can imagine themselves right in Eric's place. Don't worry about the spelling Nazi above they always look for form over content.

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