Thank you ANNE240 for a well writen story.I will be looking forward to reading more of your works.
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Anonymous12/12/03
Anne's stories
Anne,
You are such an incredible author! You are by far the best on this entire site! You have an amazing gift to paint such a vivid picture with your words. Every story you have written is truly amazing and extremely erotic, and to anyone that hasn't read them, I suggest you do! You have changed my entire view on erotic stories, and my only critisism is that I am appauled that this site has never recognized your abilities with an award! Please keep writing, you are truly amazing. I think many of the authors on this site could take a cue from you!
Sandra
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Anonymous12/15/03
One very hot story
Anne, this is one of my favorite stories. Well written and sympathetic characters, and very hot!
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Anonymous12/15/03
Amaaaazing Writer!!!
I just can't believe that I just found your writing - I must have been sleeping myself. I've read several of your stories and MAN! you just hit it for me time & time again. I was just writing to someone about how I love incest and lesbian stuff +, and then BINGO!, I come upon your writings. Thank you from the bottom of my heart! I absolutely love your style and content. It's so real and flowing that I can't perceive it to be fiction. As the song says,"You send me!" Gary.
God... your stories are so hot!!! How do you think of all of these wonderful stories... I think of ideas but you make them FLOW like... well like CUM from your characters!!!
Honey... DO IT!! DO IT!!! Keep writing... I think you're the best here, as I've said before.
Anne, you are an amazing story teller! From your descriptions, I could feel their heat and smell their sex. Keep up the great work!!!
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Anonymous01/06/04
2 Much!
my sister and I masturbated to this story together. I just thought you should know! We both like this site, but we never did anything like that before. This story was just so hot, we couldn't help it! We're gonna read more of yours, and hopefully we'll go further! Thanks Anne
Love,
Ann & Lori
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Anonymous02/22/04
Anne, You are awesome
hi anne i just thought i would tell you, you are by far the greatest author on the entire net!! Keep writing i love it!!
...let's just say "clothes" and leave it at that. On a scale of 1-5, this story is an easy six-and-a-half. Wow. I agree with many of the other posters on this message board, you really are the best writer on Literotica! If you don't yet write professionally, you should! Wow. Again.
Well, my hands are shaking so much now it's hard to type (and think coherently,) so I'm gonna sign off. Keep up the great work!
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Anonymous09/09/06
WOW!
I was just bumbling through this site and I found this story and all I can really say is "WOW!" You are amazing and I felt the whole story as I was reading it. I actually got lost. You're very talented!
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Anonymous10/02/06
You're the best author on this site
Your writing is so erotic and exciting. I love your sister stories and have been my sisters lover for years. I love how vividly you discribe sisterly love.
- Dana
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Anonymous10/02/06
No, your good, but Scouries is the best.
Both of you should just quit this incest shit though. Maybe I will bring you two sexy people togetther and you'll write and fuck together and just keep your family out of it like you should. Its so annoying to be forced to follow such wonderful writers into this ugh! area. I know you bot write incest stories coz you have noticed that they get the highest ratings and reads, coz USA is full of sickos.
I mean, I might have entertained thoughts of fucking my sis, my cousins, my aunt, the whole damn family, in fact, but I wouldnt write about it, coz that is wrong. Plain wrong.
Just bullshitting. But stop writing incest. You wonderful work is needed elsewhere. These sickos will always have enough people to cater to them. Just dump them... Please!!!
English
seafairer4usa
Thank you ANNE240 for a well writen story.I will be looking forward to reading more of your works.
Anne's stories
Anne,
You are such an incredible author! You are by far the best on this entire site! You have an amazing gift to paint such a vivid picture with your words. Every story you have written is truly amazing and extremely erotic, and to anyone that hasn't read them, I suggest you do! You have changed my entire view on erotic stories, and my only critisism is that I am appauled that this site has never recognized your abilities with an award! Please keep writing, you are truly amazing. I think many of the authors on this site could take a cue from you!
Sandra
One very hot story
Anne, this is one of my favorite stories. Well written and sympathetic characters, and very hot!
Amaaaazing Writer!!!
I just can't believe that I just found your writing - I must have been sleeping myself. I've read several of your stories and MAN! you just hit it for me time & time again. I was just writing to someone about how I love incest and lesbian stuff +, and then BINGO!, I come upon your writings. Thank you from the bottom of my heart! I absolutely love your style and content. It's so real and flowing that I can't perceive it to be fiction. As the song says,"You send me!" Gary.
Again, and yet again!!
God... your stories are so hot!!! How do you think of all of these wonderful stories... I think of ideas but you make them FLOW like... well like CUM from your characters!!!
Honey... DO IT!! DO IT!!! Keep writing... I think you're the best here, as I've said before.
"In dreams I kiss your hand, Madam."
Your Slave, ;-], Ralph
More than hot...
Anne, you are an amazing story teller! From your descriptions, I could feel their heat and smell their sex. Keep up the great work!!!
2 Much!
my sister and I masturbated to this story together. I just thought you should know! We both like this site, but we never did anything like that before. This story was just so hot, we couldn't help it! We're gonna read more of yours, and hopefully we'll go further! Thanks Anne
Love,
Ann & Lori
Anne, You are awesome
hi anne i just thought i would tell you, you are by far the greatest author on the entire net!! Keep writing i love it!!
Jasvinder S. K.
Made me cum!
the building of the sexual tension was so well done
OMFG! So hot I burned a hole in my...
...let's just say "clothes" and leave it at that. On a scale of 1-5, this story is an easy six-and-a-half. Wow. I agree with many of the other posters on this message board, you really are the best writer on Literotica! If you don't yet write professionally, you should! Wow. Again.
Well, my hands are shaking so much now it's hard to type (and think coherently,) so I'm gonna sign off. Keep up the great work!
WOW!
I was just bumbling through this site and I found this story and all I can really say is "WOW!" You are amazing and I felt the whole story as I was reading it. I actually got lost. You're very talented!
You're the best author on this site
Your writing is so erotic and exciting. I love your sister stories and have been my sisters lover for years. I love how vividly you discribe sisterly love.
- Dana
No, your good, but Scouries is the best.
Both of you should just quit this incest shit though. Maybe I will bring you two sexy people togetther and you'll write and fuck together and just keep your family out of it like you should. Its so annoying to be forced to follow such wonderful writers into this ugh! area. I know you bot write incest stories coz you have noticed that they get the highest ratings and reads, coz USA is full of sickos.
I mean, I might have entertained thoughts of fucking my sis, my cousins, my aunt, the whole damn family, in fact, but I wouldnt write about it, coz that is wrong. Plain wrong.
Just bullshitting. But stop writing incest. You wonderful work is needed elsewhere. These sickos will always have enough people to cater to them. Just dump them... Please!!!
VastieSmith
Constructive criticism
I like it. There are some things I might tweak a little, but otherwise, it's good.
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