Fine start, look forward to Ch. 2 ŵith mom and aunt June joining up.
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Anonymous06/06/14
4 out of 5 stars
I'd have enjoyed this chapter better if the author had written a story-line in which the outcome had been slightly different. Instead of letting himself get carried away by his Aunt June's sudden proposition, he agrees to it - but she'll have to help him get Mom finished in the shower, and into bed. Then he's Aunt June's, for the rest of the night.
If the drunken mother drowns in the shower
while these two are falling in love. They will
never get over the guilt....
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Anonymous06/08/14
Decent writing, but ...
as another wrote, how could you forget about mom? I hope in the next chapter that he remembers about his mother, and they deal with her before they take care of their sexual needs.
mom is alone on the floor of the shower, with no idea where she is, wallowing in her own filth.
oooh what a promising beginning.
not
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Anonymous06/23/14
The premise of the shack-up between aunt and nephew seemed a little rushed, even accounting for alcohol as the great inebriator of inhibitions. Call it personal taste, but I like a little more work going into the family coming together.
English
Fine start, look forward to Ch. 2 ŵith mom and aunt June joining up.
4 out of 5 stars
I'd have enjoyed this chapter better if the author had written a story-line in which the outcome had been slightly different. Instead of letting himself get carried away by his Aunt June's sudden proposition, he agrees to it - but she'll have to help him get Mom finished in the shower, and into bed. Then he's Aunt June's, for the rest of the night.
* * * *
If the drunken mother drowns in the shower
while these two are falling in love. They will
never get over the guilt....
Decent writing, but ...
as another wrote, how could you forget about mom? I hope in the next chapter that he remembers about his mother, and they deal with her before they take care of their sexual needs.
meanwhile
mom is alone on the floor of the shower, with no idea where she is, wallowing in her own filth.
oooh what a promising beginning.
not
The premise of the shack-up between aunt and nephew seemed a little rushed, even accounting for alcohol as the great inebriator of inhibitions. Call it personal taste, but I like a little more work going into the family coming together.
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