Fine start, look forward to Ch. 2 ŵith mom and aunt June joining up.
by
Anonymous06/06/14
4 out of 5 stars
I'd have enjoyed this chapter better if the author had written a story-line in which the outcome had been slightly different. Instead of letting himself get carried away by his Aunt June's sudden proposition, he agrees to it - but she'll have to help him get Mom finished in the shower, and into bed. Then he's Aunt June's, for the rest of the night.
If the drunken mother drowns in the shower
while these two are falling in love. They will
never get over the guilt....
by
Anonymous06/08/14
Decent writing, but ...
as another wrote, how could you forget about mom? I hope in the next chapter that he remembers about his mother, and they deal with her before they take care of their sexual needs.
mom is alone on the floor of the shower, with no idea where she is, wallowing in her own filth.
oooh what a promising beginning.
not
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Anonymous06/23/14
The premise of the shack-up between aunt and nephew seemed a little rushed, even accounting for alcohol as the great inebriator of inhibitions. Call it personal taste, but I like a little more work going into the family coming together.
I think you have an excellent start, and I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
I also think that this 7 parter could have been done in 3, by having more than one page in a part. Note that I am NOT against long stories, just hate downloading so many stories... but what do I know? I'm giving you a 4**** so far, only for that reason.
I am glad that you are totally engrossed with tits that would put a cow to shame but... not everyone has that kink... but what do I know...
I will vote the following parts, assuming that I finish them, but probably wont comment unless there is a good reason, until the end.
English
Fine start, look forward to Ch. 2 ŵith mom and aunt June joining up.
4 out of 5 stars
I'd have enjoyed this chapter better if the author had written a story-line in which the outcome had been slightly different. Instead of letting himself get carried away by his Aunt June's sudden proposition, he agrees to it - but she'll have to help him get Mom finished in the shower, and into bed. Then he's Aunt June's, for the rest of the night.
* * * *
If the drunken mother drowns in the shower
while these two are falling in love. They will
never get over the guilt....
Decent writing, but ...
as another wrote, how could you forget about mom? I hope in the next chapter that he remembers about his mother, and they deal with her before they take care of their sexual needs.
meanwhile
mom is alone on the floor of the shower, with no idea where she is, wallowing in her own filth.
oooh what a promising beginning.
not
The premise of the shack-up between aunt and nephew seemed a little rushed, even accounting for alcohol as the great inebriator of inhibitions. Call it personal taste, but I like a little more work going into the family coming together.
Too Big
You lost me at the first mention of a 38 DD bra.
What an excellent start.
I think you have an excellent start, and I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
I also think that this 7 parter could have been done in 3, by having more than one page in a part. Note that I am NOT against long stories, just hate downloading so many stories... but what do I know? I'm giving you a 4**** so far, only for that reason.
I am glad that you are totally engrossed with tits that would put a cow to shame but... not everyone has that kink... but what do I know...
I will vote the following parts, assuming that I finish them, but probably wont comment unless there is a good reason, until the end.
Why not mom?
Why Was MOM drumk?
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