Minimalist in the best of ways. You have made made an isolated scene, this pov and the absence of dialogue work very well. Quite the trifecta.
thank you for sharing this beautifully written erotica. loved it.
This story had me actually feeling like I was there. Very well written. I was on the edge of my seat wanting cum myself
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Mmmmm. Yummmmm.
Minimalist in the best of ways. You have made made an isolated scene, this pov and the absence of dialogue work very well. Quite the trifecta.
lovely.
thank you for sharing this beautifully written erotica. loved it.
This story had me actually feeling like I was there. Very well written. I was on the edge of my seat wanting cum myself
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