All Comments on 'Naked in the Dark'

by MaxwellHawthorne

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 10 years ago
Mmmmm. Yummmmm.

Minimalist in the best of ways. You have made made an isolated scene, this pov and the absence of dialogue work very well. Quite the trifecta.

small_town_girlsmall_town_girlalmost 10 years ago
lovely.

thank you for sharing this beautifully written erotica. loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This story had me actually feeling like I was there. Very well written. I was on the edge of my seat wanting cum myself

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