by subtleperfume
Short or no, what a wonderful surprise on a Tuesday morning. Serves nicely as the launching point for something longer if you wanted. Thanks so much!
While I hope you will return to the lush, long-form character dramas at which you so obviously excel, this is a delicious appetizer in the meantime. Please don't stay away so long this time, okay?
What a fine piece of writing....A complete story in one page and without a single alien, werewolf, ghoul, witch or warlock...Delicious!
Perfect little story... My only concern, for those of us that visit a wax salon - will we ever be able to go again without having that vision in our heads? I don't think so :)
As always your story was so good. You definitely have no rust in your writing. I hope this starts a new time frame for you in writing for this site. As I have conveyed to you in the past, your stories are some of the best I have ever read.
What more can one ask for than a smokin' hot and well-written story? It was a joy to read.
"My only concern, for those of us that visit a wax salon - will we ever be able to go again without having that vision in our heads?"
This would be a bad thing because...? :D
It's been three years since I've written anything and this is so different from my previous entries I wasn't sure if readers would like it. So thank you to everyone for taking the time to comment. The kind remarks are deeply appreciated.
I happened to check literotica today, not expecting much. Then I saw a new submission... Relief...by subtle perfume? That looked awfully familiar. Subtle perfume? The one and only? And it was. I don't think I expected you to submit another story but I'm glad you did. I enjoyed this story but I suppose I prefer some of your older stories with more depth and romance. Still hope you continue submitting stories!
That was amazing, honeypie. Everything about it appeals to the senses. Wonderfully realised in words, it unfolds like a movie scene so that the reader is completely immersed. Hell, I could even hear their voices. Lively dialogue, by the way. So real that you'd swear you must've overheard it. And the sex of course, is sizzling. I'm so glad you found the time to write this, cos it's a knockout.
These stories, even when well written, often have inept endings. Your ending was perfect.
none here. what a pleasant surprise to see something (anything) posted from you.
your writing is very special whether a long, involved story or something like this.
I loved this and if you decided to do a second chapter, I would not complain.
thank you for giving us another morsel of your writing. I hope to see more in the future.
thank you. you have a special gift!
I am so happy you decided to write again. I hope this was the first of many to come. Thank you for the wonderful return. Oh and I saw no rust at all... Just beautiful lust!
That was simply delicious. Sweet and spicy, just like I like it! Thank you. :)
Your stories feature some of the finest writing to be found on this site. What a delightful surprise to receive praise from such a splendid wordsmith and imaginative storyteller.
What a pleasant surprise. I was thrilled reading your words in an artful way of making love. The fantasy of loving seems so real with your words. I know when I return to my saloon I know my eyes will be shut tightly as these words play out in my mind.
I hope that this is just the beginning of your return. Well done.
I fell in love with Remembering Ava a couple of years ago and I'm so glad to see you've posted something new. This story didn't disappoint in the slightest.
I'm thrilled that you found your muse. Hot, sexy and delicious!
Thank you :-)
Title of my comment says it all really! Nicely done. I've been reading much longer stories on this site so it's refreshing to get a short, well-written, well-paced quickie every once in a while!
The older I get, the more I appreciate a simple, sexy, well-written sketch and this story fits the bill perfectly. Even short stories take a lot of time to put together so my thanks and appreciation for your creativity and effort, not to forget the courage to publish.
PS: Your have a very provocative and delightful biography.
Hallo Subtleperfume!
Beautifully written, hot and sexy! ... After reading your story "Relief", I was in need of relief 😜
Thank-You... 5-Stars and 5-Hot Yummy Orgasms..
Gay Kat.
Subtleperfume,
This story has all the marbles. It doesn't tease much and I'm curious whether you see this 'getting right down to business' is more or less sexy than these two doing an extended dance until they can't stay apart. I also think this level of juiciness is a male fantasy, but I wonder how many women have the experience of being this wet when turned on. Is this 'poetic license' or more common than most men know?
Nice work.
i have just finished reading all your stories - in one go.
you are easily amongst the finest writers on this platform.
your work combines superb descriptive skills, deep human insight, sensitivity, and boiling hot sexiness.
i am more than a little saddened that you seem to have stopped writing years ago. what a pity!
if you ever do write again on this site, please do me the kindness of alerting me.
take care,
xoxo