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The Misadventures of Elena Ch. 01

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by Axelotl06/04/14

Good job!

It may be a little rough around the edges, but you are a good storyteller. Thantor seems to me like a dark elf in an orcs body. "Well whoever you marry will just have to settle for sloppy seconds!" XD Well done frog7, and thanks for the entertaining read. I'll watch for the next one :)
-Ax

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by Anonymous06/07/14

It was ok

The delivery ruined the whole thing

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